Sneeze
Jan 5, 2016 21:11
When you sneeze, you will close your eyes naturally.
This is because to prevent your eyes from popping out (eyeball dislocation).
If you close your eyes strongly, your cheek muscles will rise, and your nasal cavity will expand.
As the result, the breathability of your nose will become smooth, and the pressure on your eyeballs will become suppressed.
Therefore, if you sneeze without closing your eyes, your eyeballs may pop out literally.
This is because to prevent your eyes from popping out (eyeball dislocation).
If you close your eyes strongly, your cheek muscles will rise, and your nasal cavity will expand.
As the result, the breathability of your nose will become smooth, and the pressure on your eyeballs will become suppressed.
Therefore, if you sneeze without closing your eyes, your eyeballs may pop out literally.
くしゃみ
くしゃみをするとき、私たちは自然と目をつぶります。
これは、目玉が飛び出さないよう（眼球脱臼しないよう）にするためです。
目を強く閉じると頬の筋肉が上昇し、鼻腔が広がります。
その結果、空気の通りが良くなり眼球への圧力が抑えられます。
そのため、目を閉じないでくしゃみをすると、文字通り目玉が飛び出すことがあるようです。
くしゃみをするとき、私たちは自然と目をつぶります。
これは、目玉が飛び出さないよう（眼球脱臼しないよう）にするためです。
目を強く閉じると頬の筋肉が上昇し、鼻腔が広がります。
その結果、空気の通りが良くなり眼球への圧力が抑えられます。
そのため、目を閉じないでくしゃみをすると、文字通り目玉が飛び出すことがあるようです。
No. 1 ChocolateCappuccino's correction
- Sneeze
- Sneezing
- When you sneeze, you will close your eyes naturally.
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When you sneeze, you naturally close your eyes .
What you wrote was correct but I just rephrased it in a better way.
- This is because to prevent your eyes from popping out (eyeball dislocation).
- This is because to prevent your eyes from popping out (which is known as eyeball dislocation).
- If you close your eyes strongly, your cheek muscles will rise, and your nasal cavity will expand.
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If you close your eyes tightly, your cheek muscles rises, and your nasal cavity expands.
Strongly sounds a bit strange as I used tightly instead which are similar, but in this context, the same meaning. I removed the 'will' because in English, it is already implied. You only say 'will' when you try to emphathise something.
- As the result, the breathability of your nose will become smooth, and the pressure on your eyeballs will become suppressed.
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As the result, the breathability of your nose will become smooth, and the pressure on your eyeballs will become suppressed.
Sorry, I don't understand why you're trying to say here. If you explain to me, I can correct it :)
- Therefore, if you sneeze without closing your eyes, your eyeballs may pop out literally.
- Therefore, if you sneeze without closing your eyes, your eyeballs may literally pop out.
Keep up the great work! がんばて！
kanotown
Thank you very much for the corrections and your comment!
> Sorry, I don't understand why you're trying to say here.
Sorry for my confusing English. I wanted to imply that this sentence and the above sentence has a causal relationship.
That is:
If you close your eyes tightly, your cheek muscles rises.
If your cheek muscles rises, your nasal cavity expands.
If your nasal cavity expands, the breathability (airway) of your nose becomes smooth.
If the breathability of your nose becomes smooth, the pressure on your eyeballs will become suppressed.
If the pressure on your eyeballs becomes suppressed, you can prevent your eyes from popping out.
Therefore, if you close your eyes tightly, you can prevent your eyes from popping out. The mechanism is actually complex.
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As the result, the breathability of your nose will become smooth, and the pressure on your eyeballs will become suppressed.
Sorry, I don't understand why you're trying to say here. If you explain to me, I can correct it :)
> Sorry, I don't understand why you're trying to say here.
Sorry for my confusing English. I wanted to imply that this sentence and the above sentence has a causal relationship.
That is:
If you close your eyes tightly, your cheek muscles rises.
If your cheek muscles rises, your nasal cavity expands.
If your nasal cavity expands, the breathability (airway) of your nose becomes smooth.
If the breathability of your nose becomes smooth, the pressure on your eyeballs will become suppressed.
If the pressure on your eyeballs becomes suppressed, you can prevent your eyes from popping out.
Therefore, if you close your eyes tightly, you can prevent your eyes from popping out. The mechanism is actually complex.
ChocolateCappuccino
No problem! Thanks for explaining it, it's very interesting! Are you a medical student?
So I think the best way to phrase it is:
As a result of the nasal cavity expanding, the pressure inside the nose is less intense, which therefore prevents your eyes popping out.
It may be best to seek a second opinion on this though. Your use of breathability and smooth confused me, so just be aware of how you use them next time :) Breathability doesn't mean airway and I have never heard of the word smooth being used in this context.
Best of luck!
No problem! Thanks for explaining it, it's very interesting! Are you a medical student?
So I think the best way to phrase it is:
As a result of the nasal cavity expanding, the pressure inside the nose is less intense, which therefore prevents your eyes popping out.
It may be best to seek a second opinion on this though. Your use of breathability and smooth confused me, so just be aware of how you use them next time :) Breathability doesn't mean airway and I have never heard of the word smooth being used in this context.
Best of luck!
kanotown
Thank you very much for letting me know the best way!
> Are you a medical student?
I'm an engineering student. Learning such trivial things is one of my hobbies, haha.
> Your use of breathability and smooth confused me, so just be aware of how you use them next time :) Breathability doesn't mean airway and I have never heard of the word smooth being used in this context.
Thank you for the advise! I'll be careful to use them. I learned something new, thank you again. :)
Thank you very much for letting me know the best way!
> Are you a medical student?
I'm an engineering student. Learning such trivial things is one of my hobbies, haha.
> Your use of breathability and smooth confused me, so just be aware of how you use them next time :) Breathability doesn't mean airway and I have never heard of the word smooth being used in this context.
Thank you for the advise! I'll be careful to use them. I learned something new, thank you again. :)
No. 2 Jumsalsa's correction
- Sneeze
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- When you sneeze, you will close your eyes naturally.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- This is because to prevent your eyes from popping out (eyeball dislocation).
- This is to prevent your eyes from popping out (eyeball dislocation).
- If you close your eyes strongly, your cheek muscles will rise, and your nasal cavity will expand.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- As the result, the breathability of your nose will become smooth, and the pressure on your eyeballs will become suppressed.
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As the result, the breathability of your nose will become smooth, and the pressure on your eyeballs will become suppressed.
Although what you say makes sense and 90% of English speakers would understand what you mean, breathability refers to moisture in fabric. Not a big deal though
- Therefore, if you sneeze without closing your eyes, your eyeballs may pop out literally.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting my post!
I learned something new. :)
Thank you so much for correcting my post!
I learned something new. :)
No. 3 Sharu's correction
- When you sneeze, you will close your eyes naturally.
- When you sneeze, you will close your eyes naturally.
- This is because to prevent your eyes from popping out (eyeball dislocation).
- This is because to prevent your eyes from popping out (eyeball dislocation).
- As the result, the breathability of your nose will become smooth, and the pressure on your eyeballs will become suppressed.
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As the result, the breathability of your nose will become smooth, and the pressure on your eyeballs will become suppressed.
For 空気の通り, you can also use airway (of the nose)
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post!
"Airway" must be more appropriate! Thank you :D
Thank you very much for correcting my post!
"Airway" must be more appropriate! Thank you :D
Sharu
どういたしまして～
どういたしまして～
No. 4 Yukinekorin's correction
Hi Kanotownさん！^^
Your posts are always an interesting read. It seems I could learn a lot from your posts! xD from the topics of animals to Science... your posts never fail to amaze me :D keep up the awesome work ^^
Your posts are always an interesting read. It seems I could learn a lot from your posts! xD from the topics of animals to Science... your posts never fail to amaze me :D keep up the awesome work ^^
kanotown
Hi, Yukinekorin さん :D
Thank you for the nice comment! I'm so glad and flattered (^-^)
From now on also, I will do my best!
Hi, Yukinekorin さん :D
Thank you for the nice comment! I'm so glad and flattered (^-^)
From now on also, I will do my best!
Yukinekorin
どういたしまして :D
Looking forward to them!! :3
どういたしまして :D
Looking forward to them!! :3
No. 5 Timmy's correction
- This is because to prevent your eyes from popping out (eyeball dislocation).
- This is (a natural reflex) to prevent your eyes from popping out (eyeball dislocation).
- As the result, the breathability of your nose will become smooth, and the pressure on your eyeballs will become suppressed.
- As the result, nasal breathing will become easier, and the pressure on your eyeballs will become suppressed.
Interesting! From now on I should be more careful when sneezing.
kanotown
Thank you very much always for correcting my post! :)
I think the correction is a so clever way to express my thinking.
> From now on I should be more careful when sneezing.
Haha, actually there are almost no cases that eyeballs are popped out by sneezing.
Thank you very much always for correcting my post! :)
I think the correction is a so clever way to express my thinking.
> From now on I should be more careful when sneezing.
Haha, actually there are almost no cases that eyeballs are popped out by sneezing.
Timmy
You're welcome!^_^
>Haha, actually there are almost no cases that eyeballs are popped out by sneezing.
You never know ^_^
You're welcome!^_^
>Haha, actually there are almost no cases that eyeballs are popped out by sneezing.
You never know ^_^